Pillow Talk

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Their words in bold italics,
tumbling from their mouths.
Exclamation points, asterisks,
parentheses, and footnotes.

Hidden messages.
Covert meanings.
Clever diversion,
in masked clarifications.

More to the story
left unsaid.
Never-mind the
Noise from their mouths.
and lips moving.

Inner voices, no escape.
And would not be ignored.
There is something
to be said for that.

More of the story
left unsaid.
Never-mind-

Posted by psychoholik   @   28 January 2010

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7 Comments

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Jan 29, 2010
12:43 am

Pillow Talk >>>There is something to be said for that…>> http://ow.ly/11FC5

Jan 29, 2010
12:48 am

Pillow Talk >>>There is something to be said for that…>> http://ow.ly/11FDY

Jan 29, 2010
2:30 am

Pillow Talk >>>There is something to be said for that…>> http://ow.ly/11FEj

Jan 29, 2010
7:00 am

Pillow Talk >>>There is something to be said for that…>> http://ow.ly/11FEv

Jan 29, 2010
6:44 pm

Pillow Talk – Their words in bold italics, tumbling from their mouths. Exclamation points, asterisks, parentheses, http://ow.ly/16sgxK

Feb 8, 2010
7:30 pm

Pillow Talk <> http://ow.ly/15gCS <> Audio Reading Added

Feb 11, 2010
11:46 am

More to the story
left unsaid.
Never-mind the
Noise from their mouths.
and lips moving.

I like that you haven’t gone into great detail about what is passing back and forth between two people. The silent communications were best captured by leaving them unsaid.

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